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She stands there grief turning into tears,
She has the deepest of love for him, but never
Did she realize the greatest of fears.
To her he is lost, now and forever;
Leaving only the words \"In Loving Memory\"
To mark the place where he rests at ease
This he did leave for his lover to see,
Only to remind her of a love that will never cease

\"I\'ll be waiting for you,\" the note did say,
\"You must, from now on, live for yourself
We won\'t be apart for long, but seize today.
I wish only the best for you and your health,
This is my death shroud and here I will stay
Remember me in love and no other way.\"
©2003-2009 ~archangel2c7
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this is one of the soulbird's flight poems. please don't ask me if i'm gonna kill myself, i wasn't depressed when i wrote this poem, and i do not, nor have i ever wanted to commit suicide

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lol to the suicide comment. I have written several sad poems, as have most poets here on DA, and I'm pretty sure most of them are still here.

Having just watched Moulin Rouge, I can definetely feel this poem. I like the rhyme scheme: no real pattern but it still flows. nice job.

peace.

[bmw]
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The only reason I can think for you to kill yourself is that you have or at least will have STG as a roommate.

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August 6, 2003

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